Extended and amended, my Haunting poem, would you leave comments or critique please? Thank you?

Thank you for the final couplet. I thought you'd leave me by this rather strong poem, in this room listening to her weeping and wailing. We must all give up our souls sometime, remove this old decaying vesture as Shakespeare would always say and replace it with a new one. She will get over it - the sooner the better if she wants peace and if she wants to continue her journey. Some Ave Maria, some recited prayer, some group visualization can clear the way for her to help her realize that we must be detached and naked of our earthly chains and baggages if we desire to be attached to the One.